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Post by Nelliel May 25th 2010, 5:04 pm

Umm I wrote this a year or so ago...CnC is welcome I guess ^^;

All In Mem'ry Of You

The Earth trembled
Scrolling down to the end of life itself
Reading the words
As they slowly echoed into myself

Impossibly true
It took a while to settle in
And when it hit
I felt every single light go dim

Inevitable future
But it locked in too close to home
Pain spread
Anger forming in my tone

Dying acceptance
As my reality became my end
Melting Resistance
As I realized the neverending trend

Single Day
It took to take the rest of me
Realization
My slowly made enemy

Heart Closure
As I suppressed my feelings inside my dome
The Love of that brother
Something I'll know nevermore

September 14th
The loss of something held only true
One f***ng day
How do you expect me to live with the loss of you...
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Post by Sally123 May 25th 2010, 5:25 pm

So beautful....
Nice job, I love it.
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Post by Nelliel May 25th 2010, 5:30 pm

Thank you very much :3 I was having an emotional time, so I could write. hehe
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Post by OMGITSDAVID May 29th 2010, 10:16 pm

That's so pretty...and well, Poetic xD
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