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Post by Amber May 28th 2010, 10:14 pm

This isn't my best...I wrote it a long time ago.


You've just
wasted more of my time
If you've got nothing to say then hang up
There's
someone on the other line
If you were here your beautiful eyes would
look like those of a newborn pup
I only have one more dime
Just
say what you must
Just stab me in the back one more time
Don't
shame of it
Be proud
You've succseded
It's what you always
wanted
You always wanted to make me cry, right?
Oh, so you didn't
It
just seemed to happen
It isn't an accident
don't pretend, I know
It
happens to much to be an accident
unless it's not
Don't act like
the soviet unioion
I'm not here to listen
I'm not here forever
I've
got no more dimes
Just hang up
You've wasted my time
I just
hope your pleased
with what you have done
Congratulations;
You've
made me cry
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Post by Desperate May 28th 2010, 10:37 pm

Not my favorite poem of yours, but not bad. [Come on Ambie! I know you can do better Nah nah nah nah nah jk ]
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